Summary of work covered
Elisa had written the text for 2 picture books that she was designing for children. We read through the text and made it more relevant and cut out repetition and made certain points clearer.
Recommendations
To tidy up the language and to decide on the vocabulary choices that we made.
Tutor Kirsten Alldred
Sunday 29 June 2008
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